*SPOILERS* I need help, again...

[sweeps419]

As you know, i'm makin a fic over at fanfiction.net and I need help. Here, when I can't remember something, I'll ask you guys 'cause I can't trust anyone else.

Now, what happens after you face Poison Jam? I'm too lazy to do 99th Street in the game.

[Professor K]

after you face poison Jam, I think yoyo goes nuts. but I have something to say....

Considering my comic is actually based on the Jet Set Games. I would like to keep spoilers for the games to a very dull roar. If you have a post that you want to make discussing the story of JSRF or JSR, please put *SPOILERS* at the beginning. Thanks.

[sweeps419]

My bad. Anyway, Yo-yo goes missin, and somethin else. Don't the Immortals and Noise Tanks make their appearance then also?

[Professor K]

yes.

[Mind-Storm]

clutch appears, tells you if you get 13 graff souls then he'll show you to Yoyo and runs off with them, ou have to chase him and end up in the skyskraper district where you find the immortals. and you still havnt put *SPOILERS* in the title, do it now, click edit, please. people dont like finding things out when they dont want to.

[sweeps419]

Thanks. I'll mention you guys. Uh... I'll ask for help later.

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OKAY I NEED MORE HELP!!!!

Anyone got any good ideas for chapter 15? Garam and Gum covered all the graffiti of Hikage Street, except the middle section (Where you fight the machine thing). You have any Ideas for what should happen?

I want to do the thing at the Skyscraper District/Highway Zero so bad, I can't think of crap for Hikage Street. Just so ya kno.

[Miz]

Well, first Hayashi should bust in like "I'mma kill j00!" And Garam (or Gum, depending on how you've portrayed the characters) should be like "O SHIT!", but then (choose one) Garam/Gum should just be like "We're a-gonna bust that crap up!", and Garam/Gum, while still nervous, should be all like "k". But make it really hard for them, since this is a big battle in the game.

[FuriousD]

Miz said:

Well, first Hayashi should bust in like "I'mma kill j00!"

He should actually say that, too. ;D

[SodaCombo]

not only should there be that huge machine there should be teh police

and gum and garam start throwin the police at teh macine and they plug up the gears and stuff

[sweeps419]

How about this? (Continuing from chapter 14. Read it if you want to get the jokes and stuff...)

Garam and Gum went through the alley. Garam looked at Gum. "Uhh... Gum."

"Yeah?" Gum responded.

"This is the first time out of Kogane-Cho. I don't know my way around."

"Okay! I'll lead."

Gum boosted ahead of Garam. She seen one of the Immortal's tags on a wall. She covered it with her own tag. She went towards the center section of Hikage Street. "Okay, Hayashi's planning something big. Watch your back!" She said to Garam.

"Okay." Garam said. He looked up at the sky. He seen something with eight legs. "Oh crap!"

"What is it?" Gum said.

" I see octopeople!"

"What?" Gum looks up and sees the eight legged thing.

"Ha! Ha! Ha!" the thing laughed.

Gum recognized the voice. "It sounds like Hayashi, that sick, twisted, crazy, son of a..."

"As I was saying..." Hayashi continued, "I will destroy you 'rudies' with my terror drone with eight legs, bombs, lazers, and a nice stereo!"

"See Garam!" Gum yelled at her fellow GG, "I told you he had a terror drone with eight legs, lazers, bombs, and a nice stereo!"

"Should of believed you..." Garam said.

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The terror drone pointed the lazer at Garam and Gum. It fired! "Duck!" Gum yelled. The two dodged the attack. Gum grinded a handrail and got to the top of a stairway, near the terror drone. She jumped on the terror drone. She took out a spray can and tagged a little tiny camera thing. "Yeah!"

"I can't see!" Hayashi shouted. He hit a button and a bomb flew towards a handrail, and exploded. "I'mma kill j00!"

"What?" Gum asked, "What did he say Garam?"

"I think he said Imma Billjo," Garam said.

"No you idiots! I said I'mma kill j00!" Hayashi shouted.

"That's what I said! Imma Billjo!" Garam shouted.

"I'mma kill j00, I'm gonna kill you. Same thing!"

"Oh! I thought your real name was Imma Billjo!"

"Kids these days... Prepare to die!" Hayashi pressed anothe button and fire went everywhere, burning that section of Hikage Street. Gum and Garam got away. "Can't take my flamethrower, huh?"

"Wait!" Garam yelled. He looked at his spray can. It said: DANGER! Extremely flammable liquid and vapor. Garam whispered to Gum, "If we spray the flames, there will be an explosion. Spray the fire and the terror drone will explode!"

"That just might work!" Gum said. They stood up and looked at the flames. They took a deep breath and sprayed the flames.

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"What the?" Hayashi said. He looked up. "Oh no!" The terror drone exploded. Hayashi was about 100 feet in the air. "I will get you for this!"

The GG's plan worked! Garam picked up his cell phone and called Beat.

"Hello?" Beat answered.

"Hey Beat! This is Garam. How are you and Rhyth doing?" Garam asked.

"We covered the Immortal's graffiti in our own paint. Now we're gonna check out these Pharaoh Park morons."

"See ya!"

"Alright! Wait! How's Gum?"

"She said, um... she'll... um... kiss you tonight!"

"Really?"

"No! You're an idiot!"

"Don't toy with my emotions..." Beat got aggravated.

"Sorry! Gum's doing fine! We defeated Hayashi's terror drone."

"Is Gum hurt? Any bruises? I want to make sure she's not hurt!"

"She's fine! Chill!"

"Okay. See ya!" Beat hung up.

"How are the others?" Rhyth asked.

"Fine!" Beat said, "But we have to continue to find the Immortals."

"Right! That comes first!"

Beat and Rhyth skated on towards Pharaoh Park.

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How's that?

[FuriousD]

I like it!

[sweeps419]

Thanx